Testimonials

“Natalie's editorial eye is among the best. From her in-depth understanding of plot, character, and worldbuilding, to her meticulous eye for detail, she is, truly, a master of craft. In working with her, not only are individual stories I've written better, but my overall ability as a writer is much improved. I wholeheartedly recommend working with her, and am thankful for her expertise.”

Ayana Gray, NYT Bestselling Author of Beasts of Prey

"Without Natalie I can say with certainty I never would have secured the literary agents nor the publishing team that I did. She gave me thoughtful, detailed notes that never felt overwhelming and, as a newbie author, she helped turn my very first draft of A Dawn of Onyx into something actually readable. I am forever indebted to her!”

Kate Golden, USA Today Bestselling Author of A Dawn of Onyx

“Natalie's editorial expertise took my manuscript and query package to a completely new level. I can say with absolute confidence that I wouldn't have landed my agent offers without her help. I've carried her advice forward into every manuscript I've written since, and I'd highly recommend her services to anyone hoping to improve their craft!”

Emma Clancey, represented by Jim McCarthy

“Working with Natalie has unequivocally made me a better writer. Her attention to detail, understanding of the characters, and respect for my style not only took my submission package to the next level, but gave me writing tools I still use to this day. I would highly recommend Natalie for anyone looking to upgrade their writing game with a thoughtful, kind and sharp-eyed editor.”

Ellen Meny, represented by Azantian Literary Agency

“Natalie’s critique was everything I could have hoped for and more. Not only did she identify a few of my weak points, she talked me through them in our video chat. I was able to take her notes and apply them to my entire manuscript. I know that I’m a stronger writer because of her. Another thing she helped me with was my starting point. I had started my story in the wrong place and we were able to talk through alternate beginnings and rearrange my opening. I highly recommend her. You go in for a chapter critique, but you come out with a stronger craft.”

Angelica Monai, author of Hunt a Killer: Perfect Score

“Natalie is amazing! I’m so happy I sent her my Pitch Wars chapters. She offered insightful feedback and she was so sweet and helpful throughout the whole process. I would definitely recommend her services to a friend!”

Skyla Arndt, author of Together We Rot

“I scored a free editing package in a giveaway from Natalie right before Pitch Wars. Her feedback on my submission materials for the contest was incredibly helpful, thorough, and kind. I think her edits levelled up both the material she read and my writing skills overall, thanks to her clear explanations. I then purchased another package for a second book I was about to trunk after an unsuccessful querying process and her comments, along with our editing call, were just as insightful and helpful. Long story short, the first book was selected for Pitch Wars mentorship and the second one will be published as my debut novel this year. Hire her, she's fantastic!”

Erin Fulmer, author of Cambion’s Law

“Natalie's feedback helped me approach my work from different angles and ask myself questions about my writing that I hadn't yet considered. Her straightforward notes and advice were invaluable to me in revising my manuscript. Working with her was a lovely experience that I would recommend to anyone looking for a highly skilled, personable editor with very affordable rates.”

Maya Ameyaw, author of When it all Syncs Up

“Crown Editorial has changed my writing. I did first chapter critiques with Natalie and fell in love with her eye for plot, character, and deep pov. I went on to do a developmental edit and a full line edit after that. My story has changed so much for the better since working with Crown Editorial. The best part about her services, is that she doesn't just tell you something is wrong. She offers up examples and really helps you to understand what she means and see it for yourself, which allows you to better apply her critiques to the rest of your manuscript. Natalie has made me a better writer and critique partner. I will continue to go to her for all of my editing needs and look forward to working with her in the future!”

Kelsey Brownlee

“Natalie sent detailed comments in my MS and a handy summary of her overall thoughts. We hopped on a call to discuss and Natalie was open about the feedback itself while also educating me on key concepts like emotional dominoes, mixing setting with dialogue and magic cookies. Those are now story elements that I’m always thinking about and weaving into my stories. Natalie sent a recording of our session to me, is open to clarify questions even after the session has wrapped, and she also gave me a much needed fresh perspective to my story. Natalie's critique really elevated my story and challenged me to make my work better. Would highly recommend her services!”

Jordan Richardson

“Natalie was honest without being brutal, expertly and carefully backing up her suggestions with explanations that were both convincing and encouraging—even if they were extensive. She was open to constructive discussion and was totally transparent both before and throughout the process regarding timelines and work method. I was never afraid to ask for clarification if in doubt, and I always looked forward to hearing the feedback. She even identified specific problem areas and pointed me in the direction of tools to use in the future. I felt in very safe, knowledgeable hands the whole time! 110%!”

Amalie Frederiksen

"Natalie’s editing services have been absolutely invaluable for me. She helped me see where I have been stumbling in my manuscript and gave clear and concise suggestions on how to make it better. Her critique is completely straight-forward, honest, and constructive, and not only is my manuscript much stronger because of her editing services, but also my writing itself."

Kelsey Mickailyk

“To anyone considering purchasing Natalie’s services, it’s definitely worth it! I purchased the silver package from Natalie in December 2020, and she was SO helpful when it came to shaping up my first three chapters. She gave me the push I needed to fix a few issues I thought might be there, and also pointed out a few things I hadn’t noticed at all. Her written notes were extremely helpful, and our later conversation was invaluable, as it helped me to brainstorm changes I could make in response to what she had suggested. To conclude: Natalie is the real deal. It can be hard to choose who you want to pay to review your writing, but after working with Natalie I genuinely feel like my first three chapters are a lot stronger. In a query market where it’s difficult to make yourself stand out, Natalie can definitely help with your opening pages!”

Ruby Martinez

“Natalie really helped me understand deeper POV and through her comments and edits I felt as if I was getting a lesson on writing closer to the character. It was wonderful to have a follow up video call, not only is Natalie super kind and understanding but she truly answered all my questions with details and gave me resources to learn more.”

Sara Kapadia

“Natalie's critique was focused, insightful, and illuminated issues I would never have seen on my own. Her feedback on pacing and world building was invaluable, and her enthusiasm when brainstorming plot improvements was a delight.”

Ren Kath

“Natalie gave me some important feedback about my opening chapters that I had heard before but ignored (not wanting to kill my darlings). Her suggestions for improvement were very concrete and so obvious now in hindsight. I can't believe I didn't make these revisions earlier! I strongly recommend using her services before querying (as I wish I had done!).”

Danielle Koehler

“Before submitting to Natalie, I knew there was something missing in my writing, but I couldn't figure out what that was. Natalie honed in on the problem in the opening pages and her suggestions and comments helped me see the flaws in my work and sparked ideas on how to fix them. Working with Natalie really gave me the insight and confidence I needed to make my novel stronger.”

Ruona A.